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Post by mastersilver on Aug 21, 2007 12:45:42 GMT -5
Hiya, this is a fan fic I'm working on, but I'm running out of ideas! The main villain, is, of course, the awesomely-awesome Neo Metal Sonic. It's basically a Sonic Heroes fan fic, bit my ideas are slipping away. As of now, they're in a jungle (based on the level after Frog Forest or whatever) and the 2 teams (Team Sonic and Team 1Up---my own team) are trying to figure out what to do and how to get through. But what happens after that I'm not sure of. Any help would be appreciated. Thanks!  |
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Post by Quacker Duk on Oct 2, 2007 3:02:26 GMT -5
Sure thing. What direction do you want the story to be going in? Is it the same story as Sonic Heroes, and you are just retconning your characters in, or is this a similar adventure starring your Characters and Metal Sonic? Do you need help with the Jungle sequence, or where to go after that?
Of course, being a horror fan, I always recommend doing a Hang Castle segment. Heck, you could have Neo Metal Sonic use the Tails Doll as a guard for the castle, and the Doll could creep out/attack your characters.
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Post by mastersilver on Oct 2, 2007 17:04:12 GMT -5
Hehe, I like the Tails Doll idea. Anyway, it's kinda similar, and kinda not. And I only used one fan character (2 if you count Neo Metal Sonic's "super transformation.") The other two on Team 1Up are NiGHTS (flight) and Bark the Polar Bear (power).
Sadly, I haven't worked on it for about a month since I've had some writters block.... and I'm lazy and I get caught up in playing Thing Thing Arena 1 and 2...and making stuff on Uncyclopedia.
Speakin' of which, I wrote an article that hasn't gotten a "NO REDEEMING VALUE" tag or something. I'd post the link, but that'd be spamming, I think...but it's kinda funny, expecially with the misguiding links.
And, I'm giving Neo Metal Sonic his own backstory...kind of, anyway.
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Post by Crazy Shadow on Oct 2, 2007 17:08:23 GMT -5
Master Silver, your fan fiction sounds good! I would help, but everything Quacker said was all I could ever say and a bag of Doritos. I have a Fan-Fic in the works too, so if I think of anything that could be good advice, I'll tell ya!
PS: In it, I made Shadow less whiny, and more kickass!! YAY BAZOOKAS!! *hint hint*
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Post by mastersilver on Oct 2, 2007 17:23:52 GMT -5
I like the bazookas. Maybe he could use it on Amy to shut her up or something...
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Post by Crazy Shadow on Oct 2, 2007 17:32:45 GMT -5
I like the bazookas. Maybe he could use it on Amy to shut her up or something... |
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Post by mastersilver on Oct 2, 2007 17:54:45 GMT -5
Hmm....And maybe Silver and Shadow could travel forward in time to see Sonic's reaction! That'd be hilarious! It's like...
Shadow: Hey Sonic! Guess what!
Silver: Shadow just took a Bazooka to Amy and blew her to smitereens!
Sonic: Finally!
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Post by Quacker Duk on Oct 3, 2007 13:48:40 GMT -5
Finally, Amy would get what's coming to her. A couple of thoughts -- *Metal Sonic already has a super form. It required the Master Emerald and only lasted for a short time in Knuckles' story in "Sonic and Knuckles." (Neo Metal Sonic is the same person as Metal Sonic, only with an upgrade.) *Sonic Heroes actually had a good story, just ruined by poor writing and story telling. The major flaw is forcing people to act in groups whether they would or not. Knuckles had little to no reason to be in Team Sonic. Perhaps Neo Metal Sonic stealing the Master Emerald could spur him forth in your tale? *The "Plot Twist" of Heroes was awesome, and was the meat of the story, but not set up very well. The issue was that Metal wasn't even mentioned in the game until he appeared. I know you want Metal to be the bad guy, but it's more exciting to have him appear to be Eggman until late in the game. Thus, here's possible solution for you: Team Sonic sets out to defeat Eggman (who ostensibly has a better plan then EGG FLEET O N0Z!) Along the way, they're repeatedly challenged, and occasionally assisted by Metal Sonic, who says that Eggman threw him out after he became obsolete. Meeting with Metal would lead Sonic and 1 UP through all kinds of exciting and dangerous situations on the way to confront and defeat Eggman. In the end however, it's revealed that Metal Sonic is Neo Metal, Maskerading as Eggman, and manipulated Sonic into a trap. Does that give you food for thought?  |
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Post by mastersilver on Oct 3, 2007 16:47:20 GMT -5
Well, I like NMS masqurading as Eggman. But, Eggman won't have a major role.
Never heard of Metal's transformation, but this one I'm giving him is different and I'm kinda paying an homage to Nightmare from Kirby: Fright to the Finish.
And, for the final though...I like it, but...don't be offended, but Neo Metal Sonic is actually some kid who was in an accident and his brain was placed in a robot body powered by a Chaos Emerald.
Cheesey? Yes. Random? Yes. Bound to have me get questions about how the kid was in the accident? Probably.
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Post by masterdark1 on Nov 1, 2009 4:31:48 GMT -5
I think you should combine the teams at the end to defeat NMS. However a better idea is to have NMS madqurading as a character from one of the teams and instead of helping them NMS makes alot harder.
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Post by Kingpin on Nov 2, 2009 20:24:22 GMT -5
mmm, outdated topic dude,  And when even hitler is unamused, you know your in trouble |
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