Post by Master Silver on Dec 25, 2007 20:41:41 GMT -5
The Wrath of Metal Sonic? Well, I've gone through and made some huge changes, such as:
-Team 1up no longer exists
-Eggman has a bigger role*
-Metal Sonic is not a kid who was in some accident
I decided to post this up here, and it's my first publicly-posted story... so... HERE YA GO! But it's not that great...
*Did that sound wrong?
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{IN A FORTRESS, HIGH IN THE SKY...}
Dr. Eggman: Muahahahahaha! I have finally completed my ultimate creation! With it, I will finally be able to conquer the world! METAL SONIC!
{A robot is seen. It has quills that shoot upwards, and has a long, black cape that goes up to its feet. It has “sleeves” on its arm that occur after a bolt at the forearm, and a similar thing occurs with its legs. It has red elf shoes and two bolts coming out of the side of its muzzle. The robot has a stud belt around its waste, and black shoulder pads.}
Dr. Eggman: Now, Metal Sonic. AWAKEN!
{The robot’s black eyes suddenly show two red irises, and the robot takes a step forward.}
Dr. Eggman: MUAHAHAHAHA! Yes, I have done it! With this robot, I shall conquer the world, ruling as its most supreme being! Oh wait, that goes without saying... Now, Metal Sonic! Destroy Sonic the Hedgehog!
Metal Sonic: Destroy Sonic the Hedgehog...
{The robot opens up two jetpacks from under its feet, one in each foot. It flies upwards, destroying the roof of Eggman’s fortress.
We see Sonic relaxing on the beach, without a care in the world. Suddenly, Tails rushes in, with a worried look on his face.}
Sonic: Hey Tails! What’s up?
Tails: What’s up? WHAT’S UP?! I’ll tell YOU what’s up! This THING is flying around in the sky, looking for you!
Sonic: Looking for me, eh? Well, judging by where we are, I stick out like a sore thumb!
Tails: Sonic, do you even know what’s looking for you? It’s this really freaky robot with a black cape!
Sonic: *Sarcastically* Oh NOES! A cape?! It’s a well known fact that anything with a cape is unbeatable! *End sarcasm* Really, Tails, what’s there to worry about?
Tails: Uh... that?
{Tails points upwards and Sonic looks up to find a caped creature coming down right on him. He jumps out of the way, and the robot destroys Sonic’s chair*
Sonic: Hey, I was sitting on that!
Metal Sonic: Sonic the Hedgehog! I am here to destroy you!
Sonic: That would be a lot easier to believe if you weren’t one of Eggman’s robots.
Tails: He’s a robot?
Sonic: Isn’t it obvious? I mean, look at it! Who is this guy, anyway?
Metal Sonic: I am Metal Sonic, ruler of his planet!
Sonic: Metal Sonic, huh? You don’t look anything like me!
Metal Sonic: ... ... ...
Sonic: Huh? What was that?
Tails: I don’t think he said anything.
Sonic: I know, I know. I’m testing him.
Tails: For what?
Sonic: For his—
{The robot dashes towards Sonic at a really fast speed and clotheslines him, and slams him into a tree.}
Sonic: Ohh... the pain, the pain of it all!
Metal Sonic: Ha, ha, ha...
Sonic: OH YOU’RE FUNNY! C’mere!
{Sonic dashes towards Metal Sonic and jumps into the air, and kicks the back of the robot’s head. It slams into the ground, face-first, and lies there.}
Sonic: Oh yeah, take THAT!
Tails: Sonic? Don’t get excited yet.
Sonic: Good point, Tails!
{The robot gets up.}
Sonic: bring it on, ya bucket of bolts!
{The robot turns around and dashes for Sonic, who jumps out of the way. Metal Sonic turns around and punches Sonic in the gut.}
Sonic: Oooh, that’s smarts...
Tails: Sonic! Are you alright?!
Sonic: Yeah, I’m fine... What about—
{At that moment, Metal Sonic dashes through and attacks Tails.}
Tails: AAAAH!
Metal Sonic: Ha, ha, ha...
{The robot flies away, and leaves the two coughing in the smoke from the jets.}
Sonic: Man, what is that guy’s problem??
Tails: I dunno... but he doesn’t look friendly.
Sonic: Dude, he just beat us up!
Tails: Who do you think is behind this?
Sonic: Eggman!
-Team 1up no longer exists
-Eggman has a bigger role*
-Metal Sonic is not a kid who was in some accident
I decided to post this up here, and it's my first publicly-posted story... so... HERE YA GO! But it's not that great...
*Did that sound wrong?
_________________________________
{IN A FORTRESS, HIGH IN THE SKY...}
Dr. Eggman: Muahahahahaha! I have finally completed my ultimate creation! With it, I will finally be able to conquer the world! METAL SONIC!
{A robot is seen. It has quills that shoot upwards, and has a long, black cape that goes up to its feet. It has “sleeves” on its arm that occur after a bolt at the forearm, and a similar thing occurs with its legs. It has red elf shoes and two bolts coming out of the side of its muzzle. The robot has a stud belt around its waste, and black shoulder pads.}
Dr. Eggman: Now, Metal Sonic. AWAKEN!
{The robot’s black eyes suddenly show two red irises, and the robot takes a step forward.}
Dr. Eggman: MUAHAHAHAHA! Yes, I have done it! With this robot, I shall conquer the world, ruling as its most supreme being! Oh wait, that goes without saying... Now, Metal Sonic! Destroy Sonic the Hedgehog!
Metal Sonic: Destroy Sonic the Hedgehog...
{The robot opens up two jetpacks from under its feet, one in each foot. It flies upwards, destroying the roof of Eggman’s fortress.
We see Sonic relaxing on the beach, without a care in the world. Suddenly, Tails rushes in, with a worried look on his face.}
Sonic: Hey Tails! What’s up?
Tails: What’s up? WHAT’S UP?! I’ll tell YOU what’s up! This THING is flying around in the sky, looking for you!
Sonic: Looking for me, eh? Well, judging by where we are, I stick out like a sore thumb!
Tails: Sonic, do you even know what’s looking for you? It’s this really freaky robot with a black cape!
Sonic: *Sarcastically* Oh NOES! A cape?! It’s a well known fact that anything with a cape is unbeatable! *End sarcasm* Really, Tails, what’s there to worry about?
Tails: Uh... that?
{Tails points upwards and Sonic looks up to find a caped creature coming down right on him. He jumps out of the way, and the robot destroys Sonic’s chair*
Sonic: Hey, I was sitting on that!
Metal Sonic: Sonic the Hedgehog! I am here to destroy you!
Sonic: That would be a lot easier to believe if you weren’t one of Eggman’s robots.
Tails: He’s a robot?
Sonic: Isn’t it obvious? I mean, look at it! Who is this guy, anyway?
Metal Sonic: I am Metal Sonic, ruler of his planet!
Sonic: Metal Sonic, huh? You don’t look anything like me!
Metal Sonic: ... ... ...
Sonic: Huh? What was that?
Tails: I don’t think he said anything.
Sonic: I know, I know. I’m testing him.
Tails: For what?
Sonic: For his—
{The robot dashes towards Sonic at a really fast speed and clotheslines him, and slams him into a tree.}
Sonic: Ohh... the pain, the pain of it all!
Metal Sonic: Ha, ha, ha...
Sonic: OH YOU’RE FUNNY! C’mere!
{Sonic dashes towards Metal Sonic and jumps into the air, and kicks the back of the robot’s head. It slams into the ground, face-first, and lies there.}
Sonic: Oh yeah, take THAT!
Tails: Sonic? Don’t get excited yet.
Sonic: Good point, Tails!
{The robot gets up.}
Sonic: bring it on, ya bucket of bolts!
{The robot turns around and dashes for Sonic, who jumps out of the way. Metal Sonic turns around and punches Sonic in the gut.}
Sonic: Oooh, that’s smarts...
Tails: Sonic! Are you alright?!
Sonic: Yeah, I’m fine... What about—
{At that moment, Metal Sonic dashes through and attacks Tails.}
Tails: AAAAH!
Metal Sonic: Ha, ha, ha...
{The robot flies away, and leaves the two coughing in the smoke from the jets.}
Sonic: Man, what is that guy’s problem??
Tails: I dunno... but he doesn’t look friendly.
Sonic: Dude, he just beat us up!
Tails: Who do you think is behind this?
Sonic: Eggman!
