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Post by Akago on Sept 5, 2008 7:45:45 GMT -5
(I remade this thing so I could have a poll in it. But it turns out that was totally useless cause now I can't edit the poll.) For every In Character thread, when you want things organized, there must be and Out Of Character thread. This is one is for Tension, so extended plotting and OOC babble won't clog things up. No need for brackets here of course. Talk it up here all you want. For the actual RP, go here. |
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Post by Akago on Sept 5, 2008 7:47:58 GMT -5
(I don't want to edit the starter post for this, so double post, sorry.)
Current debate in the thread is up there. Need some votes.
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Post by Weirdo94 on Sept 5, 2008 7:52:18 GMT -5
*Puts on glasses and walks up to a podium, donning a well pressed suit*
*Ahem*
Why of course he wouldn't! Blue boy hates seeing anything going wrong in the world and he'd go into action without even thinking about what he's doing. Wrong or right, he'd barge in and do whatever he at least thinks would help...
...Now maybe if this was some sort of disheartened Sonic who suffered through defeat after defeat and no longer seems to be doing anything right anymore, that'd be another story...
...That would make him fifteen kinds of emo, though...and he'd still lack that whole "Not a care in the world" feeling.
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Post by Akago on Sept 5, 2008 7:57:30 GMT -5
Need I bring up ZG? At the time, Sonic didn't know Eggy was involved, yet he still tried to get to the bottom of it. At the end of SA2, stopping the Finalzord didn't have anything to do going against Eggy. Infact, he worked with Eggy to stop it. I just don't think Sonic would have the 'Its not Eggman, so I don't give a nuts' attitude.
Another point, why is Sonic not running from Amy? If we're saying what has happened in the world has caused them to grow close, that's fine, but you needa say that.
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Post by darkspriter on Sept 5, 2008 7:59:51 GMT -5
Sorry ment to and weirdo is right adout the whole defeted thing but that came later u know do not give away too much of your plot
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Post by Weirdo94 on Sept 5, 2008 8:01:26 GMT -5
Ah...well you still foreshadow it...he wouldn't be chilling...he'd be thinking...and he'd probably be a lot quieter.
You have to do things to make the reader understand that something's wrong with that overinflated ego of his.
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Post by Akago on Sept 5, 2008 8:04:51 GMT -5
As Weirdo said, foreshadowing is needed. If you can't put it in the posts, then tell us OOC. Everyone needs to know what the heck your planning. Just because we know, doesn't mean the characters we're playing know too. Otherwise, you leave the other RPers  and that is annoying. |
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Post by darkspriter on Sept 5, 2008 8:05:22 GMT -5
I know but they were only just meating me doing it in the next one and don't worry i'll post what I am planning here befor I start OKAY.
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Post by Akago on Sept 5, 2008 8:09:03 GMT -5
Again, you need to post something here so we know about your character. Like I did with Alena. You aren't playing 'you', your playing a character that you create. We aren't doing self-insertion here. |
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Post by darkspriter on Sept 5, 2008 8:38:25 GMT -5
Done and done
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Post by Akago on Sept 5, 2008 9:20:59 GMT -5
*twitches and talks to self* T-try to be nice about it... don't go and turn into a bigger ***** then Wave about it...concept-mobius.technoguild.com/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=14&Itemid=38 This is a nice fan character guide here. I wouldn't say all the information needs to be filled out. But you at least need an appearance and personality for the character. First, angel/demon/whatever. That does not belong in this Roleplay. This is Sonic the Hedgehog based. The only thing god related is Chaos and the emeralds. What makes you think an Angel, demon, or a hybrid of the two would fit in? Second, your character sounds like Dr. Frankenstein's pet. Choose ONE species and stick with it. Again, angels and demons don't work. Stay in the animal kingdom like all the rest of Sonic characters. The 'Dragon Ball Z' fighting skill thing is kinda... alright, its really cheap. Wanna know something? I never watched DBZ that much. I have no clue what your talking about here. My advice, start over from scratch for a character for this roleplay. And be more descriptive about it, and use good grammar to write it up.
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Post by darkspriter on Sept 5, 2008 9:22:22 GMT -5
okay i had a back up anyway
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Post by Akago on Sept 6, 2008 10:54:41 GMT -5
By the way, I would prefer you to completely redo your post, since the character you were dragging into this got cut.
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Post by darkspriter on Sept 10, 2008 16:49:42 GMT -5
OKay for the next part its a week later and ds has been drinking to forget choas and sonic is about to step in and help him
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Post by Akago on Sept 10, 2008 19:02:32 GMT -5
OKay for the next part its a week later and ds has been drinking to forget choas and sonic is about to step in and help him Nonono! Ds is not in this roleplay, as I said. He doesn't fit! This is your last warning, listen or your gone. |
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and that is annoying.