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Post by darkspriter on Sept 11, 2008 4:42:12 GMT -5
Who dark sun I re-bid him so I could us the same Nick name
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Post by Akago on Sept 11, 2008 13:46:42 GMT -5
Alright, but he still sounds like a reject experiment of Dr. Freinkenstien. Pick one species, not a mash of three that are overused in the fanbase. There are way to many Hedgehogs, Echidnas, and Foxes in the fanbase. Edit: Actually, after some thought (not to mention all my patience being gone and I'm getting very very annoyed) and looking back at the fact that I ALREADY SAID THAT, guess what. Your booted.
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Post by Master Silver on Sept 14, 2008 15:17:38 GMT -5
I think he got it...
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Taylor Hedgie
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Official Shadow and Rouge Fanatic
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Post by Taylor Hedgie on Oct 16, 2008 8:25:21 GMT -5
kingpin, maybe you should re-read my post. Taylor is in a secluded building, meaning no one knows where he is, and there is no group of people. o.O
Thanks for taking time to read things correctly.
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Post by Akago on Oct 16, 2008 10:05:37 GMT -5
He's right Kingpin. I have no clue what the heck you're on about. You need to be more clear about things, and you can't just go off on your own tandem. The cards you lay down have to match up with the ones other people put down. There are a few minor issues I need cleared up with him.
1) 'super powerful forms' is listed as one of his strengths. There need to be limits on these. Also, I want to add something else about this. Remember the rule on godmoding, if you break this enough times, you may have to write abilities out or have your character killed off. This is just a warning since when I see that, it makes me think someone is trying to make their character all powerful.
2) Magic is riding the border on what is allowed and what isn't. Careful not to step on toes, and remember the two elements per character rule.
3) To make what is going on with Taylor's character clear and obvious, he was speaking on the radio. Meaning he's alone, and there is no group of people. If you want to say your character somehow tracked him down, talk with Taylor about it, and start at the beginning of the break, not the end.
4) Your character's demeanor could use something more then 'Sonic before heroes' as a description. It'd be nice if you did some rewriting to make things a bit more legible. I also think the backstory needs to be reworked for this roleplay. You can't just copy and paste one character, and try to fit him into another universe.
5) Make sure to tell someone before you pull a character into the story. I did see you post this profile under 'Post your characters here', but without telling me you want this character in the story there isn't much point.
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Post by Master Silver on Oct 16, 2008 14:11:23 GMT -5
Bleh, screw it, I'mma leaving the RP. Do whatever ya want with Disaster. He's yours to control now.
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Post by Weirdo94 on Oct 16, 2008 16:02:21 GMT -5
You are now "Master Epic Fail", just so you know.
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Post by Akago on Oct 16, 2008 18:12:13 GMT -5
Great, now I gotta go fishing for more RPing members. IF YOUR CHARACTER GETS RAPED BY A PREPUBEIST YAOI FAN, IT'S YOUR OWN FAULT!
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Post by Kingpin on Oct 16, 2008 19:16:59 GMT -5
Hey Taylor *pokes taylor with a stick* could ya find a way to start a battle with my char? Akago said foreshadowing is needed and so i'ma gonna say I plan to fight him anyways... *shot*
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Taylor Hedgie
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Post by Taylor Hedgie on Oct 17, 2008 9:02:08 GMT -5
No, because that would ruin what I was planning to do with Taylor. Can I request that his post be deleted or something?
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Post by Akago on Oct 17, 2008 14:42:09 GMT -5
Being that there are multiple inconsitencies between your post and his, I do think a redo is in order.
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Post by Kingpin on Oct 17, 2008 16:26:30 GMT -5
I just read that post a bit back, Asuni is outta that one and I shall fix his profile a bit, that and it sounded like he was talking to people heh heh... oops... i'll just be leaving *runs away*
*runs back*
I think that kinda puts him away from the "ITS OVER 9000" level Akago, his magic strenths are
Its amazing what I find when I look ^.^ *shot*
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Post by Akago on Oct 17, 2008 16:34:09 GMT -5
Kay Kingpin. Thank you for being cooperative about it.
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Post by Kingpin on Oct 17, 2008 16:37:25 GMT -5
no problemo, I should know that a derailing RP without brakes is a bad thing *imagines the jabber explosion leading to the end of the "Serious shadow discussion" and Delicious spam areas and shudders*
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